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Old September 28th 03, 06:50 PM
Dave
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I suggest you look over the above monolythic paragraph and
consider how you expect people to read it. It simply rambles.
Breaking it up into paragraphs, each dealing with a single
thought, would make a major difference. I, for one, won't bother.


Seconded!



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